My Magic Garden
At my house in France I have the most amazing Magic Garden. Every night I surprise my family and I go get the best food in France for my harvest.
My Magic Garden has a beautiful view of the sea. It also has super soil because the earth has been here without anything growing on it for hundreds of years. That is why I get such special things in my Magic Garden. One night for dinner I used the purple shells around the bananas from my super banana tree for my for dessert plates for the chocolate cake I made. They were so big they were perfect. This year in my magic garden we grew an extraordinary zuchinni. It was almost as big as me!
Garden's grow many wonderful things but my Magic Garden grow's the best food in France.
-Madison Rosenberg
3 comments:
Hey Madison, it's Anne-Laure :) I'm coming in less than 2 weeks now !!!! I am so happy because I miss you very very much. We're going to have a great time !!!!!
How is school? and how are your friends? your magic garden looks wonderful, you'll have to show me around.
much much love !!
Anna
Maddy,
We feel this writing is a five also. We enjoyed hearing about the magic garden. One thing to improve on would be:
You could add more details about things. (Izabella)
Organize your work a little more (Matthew)
You have very nice details. (Hannah)
You could add a couple more things here or there (Raine)
Thanks for all your hard work. We miss you a lot!!!!! We are looking forward to your return.
Mrs. Santello’s Class :O)
P.S. The kids and I were wondering what your whole garden and the vineyard looked like. Can you add some pictures of this?
Hello Maddy,
I was so excited to meet you at our Open House last week and am thrilled to have you in my class this year. Mrs. Santello and I have already been brainstorming ideas for assignments you can complete while you are in France. I will see you on Monday!
Mrs. Herrera
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